Whispers from the Critics

When in my writing room, I almost always have my two biggest critics present.

I read passages from my manuscript aloud.

Usually, Juice whispers to Tumbler first. Then Tumbler replies. It's a good system.
 

"Tumbler, can you BELIEVE she put that part in?"

"Juice, I like it."

 Lucky for me, they're also my two biggest fans.